HIATUS into and EVENT

posted 27th Oct 2016, 1:13 AM

HIATUS into and EVENT




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27th Oct 2016, 1:13 AM

Jarvi

See you in two months, my dear readers! :)

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27th Oct 2016, 11:39 AM

Matt Knab

Looking forward to reading the novel form! Are you going to be printing them, or just doing pdf's?

I admit that I don't understand all that's going on, but I find that having no text required the reader to be more involved/engaged in the story.

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27th Oct 2016, 7:48 PM

Jarvi

I'm not sure yet about the print version.. When I have the novel ready I guess I'll make some kind of poll to see if there are people willing to buy paper version :)

And thank you for opinion.. I'll be thinking about the execution of the story while on break :)

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27th Oct 2016, 4:20 PM

Amarok

2 months? but the comic said the boat journey was only one..

Welp guess ill mark my calendar and wait with forced patience. Hope everything goes well.

Also as for feedback on textless-ness id say youve done a good job. Only panel taht gave me trouble was the one where people wondered who was all going on the boat journey. I see no reason to change format.

Though id have questions on the details of Alaric's Family Curse. also about any other types of Fae in the universe portrayed.

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27th Oct 2016, 7:51 PM

Jarvi

Thank you for your feedback :) I see though that some people do have problems understanding what's going on so I'll use my break to think of what to do to make it better :D

And I'll see what I can do about those questions :D <3

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27th Oct 2016, 6:55 PM

Proxy170

Ahhh so excited to read some Two Hearts!!!

Hmm for feedback, I gotta say I love the changes in your art, I think it fits this kind of story well and keeps us interested even without the dialogue. But I gotta say that some of the dialogue drawings a couple pages back got me a bit confused on the literal sense, but in the end I got the general idea of what was happening. I like it, but I feel like it's going to be a challenge if your story gets more complicated! But then introducing words now would also be odd to the flow...hm...conundrum...

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27th Oct 2016, 7:55 PM

Jarvi

Yeah it is a bit of a challenge that I made for myself (Sev calls me outright crazy for making a wordless comic with actual plot xD). I'll have a bit of thinking now on what to do to make people understand it all better, but I'm happy I asked :D

And yay for excitement about Two Hearts :D

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28th Oct 2016, 6:49 AM

Amarok

perhaps keep as you would but maybe have your comment be like a hinting narration sort of thing. nudge people in the direction of proper interpretation. Also yeah thinking is involved. all the best stories make you think.

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8th Nov 2016, 4:05 PM

CiciEnixa

Hope you're feeling better and have rested lots, Jarvi X3

I think I understand the story well. There was a point in the intermission where I was very confused, but then when I reread, I realized I missed a couple pages and that cleared things up XD

I don't know if my questions will actually be explained in-story anyway, so if yes ish fine. The glowy forest god of stalkeryness... do the elfies know of him? Are they aware of the things he does?

(Do your best in da NaNo~)

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17th Nov 2016, 9:52 PM

Jarvi

Thank you for the questions :D

And you made me laugh with the little story about confusion because of missed pages :D

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18th Nov 2016, 10:06 AM

ranger_brianna_new

QUESTION: "Hey, can you actually talk, or are you just quiet?"

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30th Nov 2016, 2:04 PM

Akky

Hmm I'm okay with a lack of speech bubbles if it's just an intro. Or if the MC is simply mute. I've started reading a comic where one of the two main characters is mute and it's fun to see how you're able to understand what he is thinking or trying to say just by his expression and gestures. But I also think that forgoing text completely even though the characters are actually talking a bit weird. So I'd say, as long as your characters are able to communicate just with gestures and expressions I do not feel bothered, but once they start talking then I want to be able to read it, get a feeling for their personality, their language, their speech patterns.

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